You have a complaint about the hotel you stayed at while attending a meeting that was booked by the organiser of a company meeting. Write a letter to the organiser of the meeting and include •Details about the meeting •The problem you face •What should be done

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Dear Sir , Hope

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letter finds you well.I am writing

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letter to complain about the

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that was booked for the company meeting. Please be informed that, despite facing issues at the

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meeting with the foreign delegate went fine and looks like we will get the contract by

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month's end.But, I would like to highlight a few concerns about the

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in which I was staying for the meeting.

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,during a meeting ,I ordered a few refreshment items from the

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restaurant for the attendees and it did not come in time .

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, when it came ,it was not served in a proper way .

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,the air conditioner

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the meeting room was not working properly .These issues have made me nervous in front of our clients and I felt I was not able to properly host them.

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,I request you to please book a good

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whenever we are planning to have a client meeting at the

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.The

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should have positive reviews in infrastructure and hospitality services so that we will not have any trouble . I hope you will look into the matter and take appropriate action . Yours Sincerely, Payal

pskhandelwal13Sun Jan 19 2025

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logical structure

Consider separating the different concerns (refreshments delay, improper service, air conditioning) into distinct paragraphs for clarity.

single idea per paragraph

Use transition words like 'Moreover' or 'In addition' to enhance the flow of ideas.

complete response

You included specific details about the meeting and the issues you faced, meeting the task requirements.

suitable writing tone

The tone of the letter is formal and suitable for a business context.

greeting and closing

The letter has a clear greeting and closing, which is important for formal correspondence.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

196 words

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