A huge number of students choose to study English independently on a self-study basis rather than attend a formal course. However, without the assistance of a teacher, students often find it difficult to manage their studies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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With the globalisation, the increasing number of people learn English on their own without professional
assitances
the activity of contributing to the fulfillment of a need or furtherance of an effort or purpose
assistance
.
However
, I personally find it difficult to learn languages without appropriate helps, especially for beginners.
Firstly
,
language
learners tend to give up on studying the
language
when they face difficulties to overcome problems by themselves. In fact, the languages with special
wirting
the act of creating written works
writing
wiring
systems,
such
as Russian or Arabic require more patience and practice
than the
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with the language than
language
with
relatively simple writing system
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a relatively simple writing system
the relatively simple writing system
like English and French.
Although
I concede that there are more resources to help learners to attack the problems,
such
as books or apps, but the problem is the people need someone to help them directly according to their individual weakness. Another reason that makes foreign
language
learners feel discouraged to continue to study the
language
is a lack of person who correct their mistakes, especially for pronunciation
that is
one of the most difficult part of mastering a
language
without native speaker's aids. Even though I acknowledge that people can learn how to
pronunce
speak, pronounce, or utter in a certain way
pronounce
pronounced
correctly by watching
movie
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the movie
movies
a movie
,
however
, it goes well only when they study major languages like English
,
Accept space
,
Spanish or French. In fact, many learners of minor languages have difficulties to find movies that were filmed in the languages.
For example
, Swahili learners rarely have
chance
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the chance
a chance
to find Swahili films that will make it more complicated to learn pronunciation skills.
Finally
, self-management skill is the most important factor for successful
language
masters in my opinion. Managing timetables or making time to study demand a lot of patience that people often tend to lack when they learn alone.
Consequently
, students often end up with quitting to learn eventually. In short,
although
our modern society provides more
opporutnity
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunity
to learn languages efficiently with movies or digital devices, lack of
techers
a person whose occupation is teaching
teachers
takers
often leads learners to discourage to learn.
Therefore
, I strongly believe that learning independently is more difficult than learning in traditional courses.

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