It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30,as this is best both for the individual and for society. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
The few
people have a strong feeling that each Suggestion
Fewer
person
have
to Suggestion
has
starts
their wedding Suggestion
start
life
within an age
group
of 30 which not only better for them,
Accept space
,
also
for the surrounding society.I stand for this
point because this
lifestyle can make the couple to be mature, mostly the physical problems after 30 wil
be increased and both can support each other.
The teenage the capability of conscious choice and decision and intention
will
group
is one of the important and unforgetable lifestyle in each person
's life
.This
lifestyle would be full of fun, enjoy each and every moment without any care
of
the future, having Suggestion
in
lot
of friends circles for sharing happiness. But Suggestion
lots
this
characters
is carrying out, after they reached a position as a responsible Suggestion
character
person
. Youngsters won't accept the advice, they will learn only through their experience. After marriage is the period where they start to learn what is life
and difficulties in it. For example
,
if a Accept space
,
person
after becoming as couple spends more money in
unwanted things, definitely there would no money to run the family at the month end, after the struggle for one or two months he checks his past Suggestion
on
foot steps
and will rectify the drawbacks in the upcoming days. Like the sound of a step of someone walking
footsteps
this
, each and every scence
will a particular branch of scientific knowledge
science
scene
sense
correct they
zig-zag path to a straight and proper way, Accept comma addition
correct, they
correct them
correct them them
correct themselves
correct their
this
kind of changes will slowly turn them as responsible as there
parents. To become more responsible of them or themselves
their
person
within an age
group
of 20's is a great gift than being after
the Suggestion
over
age
of 30.
Furthermore
, the physical problems for both gender
will have Suggestion
genders
a
upward slope after the Suggestion
an
age
of 30. It is a biggest
task to take Suggestion
big
bigger
care
of them properly .
Accept space
.
For example
, after the age
of 30, if they have a baby
it is much difficult
for them to take Suggestion
more difficult
care
of baby
and them simutaneously
. At at the same instant
simultaneously
this
point, either they will be less care
about them or more care
to
the Suggestion
for
baby
. Especially, for girls, after 30, the bones will be less strenghten if she give
birth for a Suggestion
gives
baby
. The parents should also
understand this
kind of problems and make there
of them or themselves
their
childrens
to plan their a young person of either sex
children
life
in a
easier way.
To conclude, I will make a strong comment with Suggestion
an
above points
that planning career goals and achieving them is not a fulfilled success, the Suggestion
the above points
life
goals should be achieved as a couple is a real success. Steps all your responsibilties
within the the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibilities
responsibility
age
group
20's after that, have a peaceful and blissful life
ahead.Submitted by revanth on
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