Life was better when technology was simpler .To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The

specificed

(sometimes followed by 'to') applying to or characterized by or distinguishing something particular or special or unique

specific

topic is very pertinent as the same is being discussed

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multiple global forums. In

this

contemporary era,

technology

is progressing at an exponential pace. The

last

two

decade

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decades

have seen enormous changes in the way people

lives

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live

with many advances in

this

technology

field. Numerous mortals think that life was better in past

time

when

technology

was simpler while

other

plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned

others

don'

agree with

this

Technology

has revolutionised every aspect of life there are many advantages of

technology

is discussed in upcoming paragraph. To commence with

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today

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today's

hectic schedule people don'

have enough

time

to meet their

beloved but

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beloved, but

with the help of

technology

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aperson

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a person

can easily communicate and connect with the world anytime

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anywhere.

Technology

has made life very easy as well as it consumes less

time

Further

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with

technology

people

work

as well as no need to commute for sending

letter

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letters

or any other

work

Moreover

, a person

gain

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gains

any information related any field

from

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internet and daily news about what is going on in

world

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the world

Nevertheless

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the effects of

this

technology

have not all been

benefical

promoting or enhancing well-being

beneficial

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Mortals are so dependent on

technology

nowadays. They don'

like to do physical

work

as well as don'

use traditional ways to

work

This

will put negative impact on upcoming generation. People are so addicted to

socail

relating to human society and its members

social

media they don'

like to spend

time

with their family

as a result

the stress is increasing day-by-day. Children are the most affected by the

technology

and harm their health

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apart

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Apart

from

this

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it is

also

a major issue of increasing environmental problems. Taking everything into account, in the light of aforementioned arguments. It is believed that

technology

give

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gives

ease and comfortable if it is used

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with

a limit so that it don'

affect upcoming generation.

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Life was better when technology was simpler .To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

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