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Last week, you lost your luggage while traveling on holiday. Luckily, you have travel insurance. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter: Describe the characteristics of what you lost Explain how you lost it Tell the insurance company what you need from them Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to request for a travel insurance support.
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 week I had a flight from Paris to London on Air France, flight number 879. Unfortunately, after landing I could not find my luggage. I informed the airport staff and they checked the plane again and told me that nothing had left there. It was a dark blue suitcase about
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 high with the brand tag "Tiko" on it which included my personal things and clothes and more importantly some documents related to my career in a real estate company. As these documents were the original papers it costs some
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 expenses to be recreated.
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, it is vital for me to find them or make a compensation as soon as possible.
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, I attached the flight ticket including the travel insurance barcode. I look forward to reading your response. Sincerely yours, David Jones

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Task Achievement
To further improve task achievement, consider adding more detail about the steps you've taken to recover your luggage before contacting the insurance, as it shows diligence and thoroughness in your attempt to solve the issue.
Coherence & Cohesion
For even better coherence and cohesion, you might introduce a brief summary conclusion, reinforcing your request and next steps expected from the insurance company.
Task Achievement
Your letter effectively communicates the problem, detailing the lost luggage’s characteristics and the context of the loss.
Coherence & Cohesion
The structure of your letter is clear, with each paragraph dedicated to a specific aspect of your query, enhancing readability.
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