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Some people believe that advertising has a strong effect on a person’s decision-making process. Others feel that it has little or no real impact. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

#people #effect #person’s #process #impact
It is true that advertising is
x well-known method
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an x well-known method
the x well-known method
 for promotion to increase the sales.
x
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X
, While some believe that there is no effect of advertising on
decision
 making skills, I agree with those who feel that it has a huge
impact
 on making decisions. On the one hand, they think that there are
x
 few reasons that don’t make any influence of advertising on
decision
 making.
Firstly
 the main reason is unreliable adverts with
x
 small asterisk mark on the bottom.
For
example in
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example, in
 India many companies advertise some kind of offers on TV commercials in order to attract
customers but
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customers, but
 when customers visit the store they see a completely different picture.
Secondly
 advocates of these types
believes
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believe
 in a newly establish business advertisement
also
 don’t make any
impact
 on
humans
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human
human's
 mind because they are new to the market as customers gets apprehensive to buy from them.
On the other hand
, I strongly believe that advertisements have
x
 great
impact
 on
x
decision
 making process because when a company endorse a celebrity for his
product
 advertisement which will have a strong effect on a person
decision
 making. Recent research has found that a famous celebs who promoted or acted in
x
 particular ad had a great
sales
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sale
for
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of
 that
product
.
Furthermore in
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Furthermore, in
 my view these
days giving
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days, giving
 reviews by people on any
product
 advertisement making a huge influence on
human mind
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the human mind
 whether to buy a
product
 or not. To illustrate many e-commerce companies like
amazon
(Greek mythology) one of a nation of women warriors of Scythia (who burned off the right breast in order to use a bow and arrow more effectively)
Amazon
,
flipkart
 have reviews
on
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of
 products so people before making a purchase they will read the feedbacks and decide on that
product
. To conclude,
although
 sometimes advertisements are not trustworthy.
Therefore
 on balance personally, I hold the opinion that usage of famous people on adverts makes a huge
impact
 on
decision making process
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the decision making process
.
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