China: Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped?

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Countries constitute of people from different levels of the society, some rich and some poor; even in the developed countries, we can see people in a low financial background. There will be
seperate
act as a barrier between; stand between
separate
rules, implemented by governments, focussing on the development of
such
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nonwealthy
being ten more than eighty
ninety
communities.
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essay will discuss the factors leading to
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impoverished population, and how laws can assist them to lead a good life. There are many reasons for poverty in some part of the country, the most pivotal one being the geographical location.
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, some rural areas are so remotely located, that inhabitants may not be able to access facilities in cities like educational institutions, job opportunities and government offices. Obviously, societies with natives not having good education or job eventually fill up with poor people. Another reason is the mindset of public belong to some civilization, where they are reluctant to go to schools or colleges, and end up as some poorly paid workers. Most of the countries take special measurements to aid poor-class families, like budgeting money for their welfare, providing reservations in education and job sectors, and free health care facilities. In reality,
these
denotes a person or thing
this
helps not always reach to the right hands due to their lack of awareness about
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government aids and corruptions among authorities.
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, it is essential to create public awareness among citizens, about the rules and regulations helpful to low-income civilians, and educate them to change their perceptions towards a better progression in life.
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, services which are
unaccessible
capable of being reached
accessible
to villagers, because of the location, can be made reachable to them by enhancing internet connectivity and online facilities even to remote locations, all thanks to the
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advanced
technologies. In conclusion, factors like geographical positioning and narrow-mindedness of people, which lead to poverty, can overcome by providing good education and access to technologies. After all, an egalitarian society is a dream of everyone, which is possible simply by lending a hand to those in need.
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