Now a days, consumer goods have become the most important part of people lives. Do the advantages of this overweight the disadvantages?

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In
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last few decades
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the last few decades
, the living standard of the people has drastically changed. The materialistic approach of new generation has made trade goods a vital part of their
lives
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life
.
However
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, there are some demerits of
this
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also
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. In
this
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essay, I will shed some light on
merits
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the merits
and demerits of
this
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phenomenon and
then
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provide my own opinion. On the one hand, there are compelling benefits of using
consuconsumer
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items in
oue
of or belonging to us
our
daily lives. Electronic gadgets
such
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as mobile phones, computers, laptops
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have made our lives easy and comfortable.
For instance
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, if someone
want
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wants
to buy
appearls
earnest or urgent request
appeals
pearls
or any other household items, they can purchase them from various E-commerce sites by ordering them
on line
on a regular route of a railroad or bus or airline system
online
. By doing
this
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, they not only save their
time but
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time, but
avoid heavy traffic on roads.
Moreover
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, these gadgets can be carried
anywhere anytime
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anywhere, anytime
without making any special efforts. These products are available on various shopping sites at lesser price compared to retail stores.
On the other hand
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, there are some disadvantages of people relying on consumer goods on day to day basis.
First
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of all, these of items
badly affects
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badly affect
the
socials
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social
lives of individuals,. People indulge themselves in these technological inventions
bso
to a very great extent or degree
so
deeply by surfing various social networking sites which in turn demolishes the need of personal interaction with society.
Moreover
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, to purchase
there
of them or themselves
their
item
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items
, some people use
installment method
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the instalment method
instalment method
or debit/credit cards.
Consequently
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, they
sccum
consent reluctantly
succumb
themselves into heavy debts. To conclude, I firmly agree that merits of consumer products in
daily lives
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the daily lives
outweigh the drawbacks. Consumer items can save a person's time and enrich them with flexible lifestyle.

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