Scientists and technology experts seem to be more valued by modern society than musicians and artists. To what extent do you agree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words. You should spend 40 minutes on this task.
IN
THIS
CONTEMPORARY ERA, SCIENCE AND TECHNOLOGY ARE MORE VALUED THAN MUSIC AND ART. IN MY OPINION, EQUAL IMPORTANCE MUST BE GIVEN TO SPECIALISTS OF BOTH DOMAIN.
ADVANCEMENT IN AUTOMATION HAS PRODUCED COMFORT IN HUMAN LIFE. HOWEVER
, INNOVATIVE IDEAS AND NEW EXPERIMENTS ARE STILL NEEDED IN THIS
FIELD. THEREFORE
, THIS
SPECIALITY MUST BE HIGHLY VALUED. AS AN ILLUSTRATION, OWING TO SCARCITY OF, IT EXPERTS IN PAKISTAN, FEW NATIONAL EXPERTS WERE OFFERED HIGH INCOME TO REVOLUTIONIZE IT SECTOR. IN ADDITION
, SCIENTISTS DESRVE RESPECT AND HIGH STATUS IN SOCIETY, AS THEY DEVOTE MAJOR PROPORTION OF THEIR LIFE TO THE BETTERMENT OF MANKIND. FOR INSTANCE
, SCIENTISTS SPEND MANY MONTHS IN SPACE, LIVING APART FROM THEIR FAMILY TO EXPLORE AND TO ACQUIRE KNOWLEDGE SPACE TO GLORIFY AND TO CREATE EASE IN HUMAN POPULATION. THEREFORE
, IT IS VITAL TO CONSIDER PEOPLE FROM SUCH
AREAS, IMPORTANT.
ALTHOUGH
MODERN SOCIETY WELCOME AND VALUE SPECIALISTS FROM SCIENCE AND TECHNOLOGY, THE HARDWORK OF MUSICIANS AND ARTISTS CAN NOT BE DENIED. AS THEY COMFORT HUMAN SOUL BY PRODUCING POSITIVE IMPACT ON SPIRITUAL LEVEL
. TO ILLUSTRATE, STATISTICS REVELEAD, DUE TO THE PLEASING SOUND OF VARIOUS INSTRUMENTS, A MAJOR IMPROVEMENT WAS NOT IN PSYCHIATRIC PATIENTS. Suggestion
A SPIRITUAL LEVEL
FURTHERMORE
,
ART CREATES AWARNESS AMONG MASSES AS IT IS THE EFFECTIVE WAY TO CONVEY YOUR MESSAGE THROUGH CREATIVITY. Accept space
,
IN OTHER WORDS
, SHARMEEN, A NOBLE PRIZE WINNER, FROM PAKISTAN, PORTRAYED THE POSITIVE IMAGE OF WOMEN AND HIGHLIGHTED THE DOMISTIC VIOLENCE ISSUE. HENCE
, THE ROLE OF THE EXPERTS FROM MUSIC AND ART IS UNDENIEABLE.
TO CONCLUDE, OWING TO MODERNIZATION, SCIENE AND TECHNOLOGY IS CONSIDERED VITAL IN THIS
ERA.IN MY VIEW, THE ROLE OF EXPERTS FROM SCIENCE ,
TECHNOLOGY MUSIC AND ARTS MUST BE CONSIDERED EQUAL IN SOCIETY.Accept space
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