Some people think that modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Technology has grown rapidly over

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last few years

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the last few years

. It has opened many new ways of communicating with other people around the world.

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, it has taken away the physical presence essential in building relations with others in the past. In my opinion, I will discuss how

this

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has affected social lives of individuals. Digital

communication

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has advanced exponentially in recent year. It has changed the way we communicate and share information with friends, families and others. Simultaneously, it has

bought

take something or somebody with oneself somewhere

brought

changes in introducing new people using social media and other interactive applications. People who are isolated, now have a chance to meet like-minded people irrespective of their location. Sharing of ideas and working together on challenging problems is more fun with the aid of video calling and messaging.

Internet

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The internet

has provided the opportunity of

have

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has

these experience

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these experiences

this experience

without which

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without, which

is not possible.

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, technology has not filled the gap

of

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by

bringing and building

relationship but

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relationship, but

also

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taken away face-to-face

communication

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experience from the past.

In other words

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, people met and interacted with each other on

regular basis

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a regular basis

.

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personaly

concerning or affecting a particular person or his or her private life and personality

personal

communication

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is needed in developing a very strong

relationships

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relationship

that could

last

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for a life time.

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, the experience of physically meeting and understanding each other can never be a substitute to

moder

belonging to the modern era; since the Middle Ages

modern

ways

communication

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. In conclusion, technology played a vital role in meeting new people from different place at the ease of

you

of you or yourself

your

personal comfort.

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Moreover it

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Moreover, it

has not provided a fully

equiped

provided or fitted out with what is necessary or useful or appropriate

equipped

solution in building meaningful bonds between people.