There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays? Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

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In today's
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world there
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world, there
are various
kind
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kinds
of
music
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available.
Music
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is essential for each and every individual living in the
world
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.
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, conventional
music
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of the nation is more valuable than the International
music
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which is popular in the
world
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nowadays
Music
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plays
crucial role
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a crucial role
in every
persons
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person's
life. As people shares
there
of them or themselves
their
feelings with the help of
music
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.
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, most researchers in
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the world
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claim
that
music
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helps the individuals to get relax as well as it is more like medicine to some peoples.
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, there are
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an institute
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provides
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music
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therapy to solve the problem of the individual. Without
music
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is the life is meaningless. Whereas, conventional
music
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of the
country
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is more valuable than International
music
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because it represents the culture of the nation.
People
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The people
of the
country
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like to listen and enjoy the traditional
music
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because
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music
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the music
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consists
some meaning and
also
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represents there the culture. In the
world
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, each
country
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have
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has
there
of them or themselves
their
own traditional
music
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. In my opinion, there are different types of
music
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availabe
obtainable or accessible and ready for use or service
available
in the
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world but
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world, but
people like the
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country traditional
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country, traditional
music
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and each every person living in the
world
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is connected to the
music
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in some or the other way.
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