Some teachers think that international student exchange would be beneficial for all teenage school students. Do you think its advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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Some would argue that exchange
program
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benefit to all adolescent students.
While
(often used as a combining form) in a good or proper or satisfactory manner or to a high standard ('good' is a nonstandard dialectal variant for 'well')
Well
, there is a possibility of
students
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student
misbehavior
improper or wicked or immoral behavior
misbehaviour
due to freedom away from home.
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, I believe that student’s get an opportunity to explore
new
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a new culture
new cultures
culture
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, learn new things about
life
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and develop as a person. These opportunities outweigh the drawback. When students are away from
home they
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home, they
often badly behaved, get into trouble with teachers and guardians because students are not under the supervision of their parents and
this
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newly found freedom can lead to delinquency.
For example
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, when I was in France at the age of 16, I was not with my family. I along with my friends drink alcohol for the
first
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time.
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,
this
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does not mean that exchange
program
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is not worthy, but it is better for all the student comes under strict supervision during the
program
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. Attending
program
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in a new country given an opportunity
to
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for
students to get to know about
new
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new cultures
a new culture
culture
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and embrace the new tradition and
way
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a way
of
life
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of a new place through the students they live with. Exploring
new
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the new culture
culture
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and tradition open eyes of any person and exploring
new dimension
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a new dimension
new dimensions
of
life
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and perspective about
life
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.
For example
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, when I was studying my MBA in India, one of my friends told me to explore
Hindu spiritual path
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the Hindu spiritual path
a Hindu spiritual path
. I visited Himalayas to explore
spiritual path
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a spiritual path
with the help of meditation and yoga,
this
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experience helped me to discover myself and it changed my
life
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. In conclusion,
this
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program
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gives an opportunity to students to explore
new
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new cultures
a new culture
culture
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and embrace
new idea
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a new idea
the new idea
new ideas
of
life
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by meeting new people, all these opportunities outweigh the drawback of
misbehavior
improper or wicked or immoral behavior
misbehaviour
, while studying in a foreign country.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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