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To what extent has the traditional male role changed in the last 20 years? Many people believe that women make better parenting than men and that this is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting. Write an essay expressing your point of view. Give reasons for your answer.

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I agree with the fact that females provide good parenting and nurturing than men and
this
 is why they have the major part in uplifting their children's life in many of the communities. Women can play both the role of a father and mother. During the
last
 decade, most of the females engage in household activities and played full-time housewife role. But there is a drastic and tremendous change over the previous 20 years. Women acquired equal rights that men possess and education made a difference in their thinking process and reasoning. Women are getting a high-quality education and better employment in modern societies.
Besides
 doing their job, women are taking
care
 of their children and doing household activities too. The changes happened in their education trend brought a miraculous difference in the modern society thought process. All women in
this
 era are working women and
this
 is a major factor which I believe forced males to take
care
 of their children while the mother goes for her work. The increasing demand for money to meet the daily requirements
also
 play a significant part to push men to do household activities and taking
care
 of children. To some extent, I agree with the fact that men are doing their best in parenting. In
this
 modern world of technological advancements and scientific inventions, it is difficult to take
care
 of the family needs with one person's job. For the better future of the children, financial establishment is a necessity. If both parents are dividing their roles in caring their children can save the money, which is supposed to give to a servant. In conclusion, I totally agree with the fact that men are as good as women in taking
care
 of children which is really appreciable.
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