Nowadays, internet and television has given ordinary people a chance to become famous. Is this a positive or negative development? Give your opinion and relevant examples

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In today's world, due to the advancement of technology getting fame is much easier than before through the web and television world. Some common person comes to

lamelight

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the limelight

limelight

lame light

through negative

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a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty

opinion

opinions

opening

on society or

othere issue's

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the other issue's

other issue's

author issue's

. I believe, it is a good positive sign, we get to know many hidden talents in our country with the help of internet and Television. To embark upon, when an ordinary person

place

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places

an opinion about any issue,

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not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied

other

people get offended and make him famous by defaming. Everyone's

have

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having

a different opinion about one particular thing, when someone comment on any

issue it

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issue, it

gets viral due to

of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"

its

questions other's belief system, that person get trolled on

internet

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the internet

or in news channels eventually become

overnight famous

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famous overnight

For example

, In India, ten years ago,

student

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a student

who was doing her master wrote a letter to government officials about removal of

reservation system

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the reservation system

from

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Indian society as job's cannot be allotted to only few caste people,

this

letter created an outcry in social media making her famous but in a negative way, people trolled on twitter for many days.

which

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Which

effected her personal life

alot

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a lot

However

, there are some positive sides of

this

internet and television. These are the only platform to show unique skills to the whole world. There are so many common people made their

carrer

the particular occupation for which you are trained

career

careers

by showcasing their unique talent

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social media and

throught

all the way through

throughout

through

thought

television shows.

For example

, Famous singer Amala Paul got overnight fame through one of the singing reality show and now she is the most popular singer in India. In conclusion, with the help of media and on web, common man get famous for the wrong reason which can

ruined

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ruin

their life, but at the same time there are many ordinary people who made their mark in

this

society by their hidden talent.

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Nowadays, internet and television has given ordinary people a chance to become famous. Is this a positive or negative development? Give your opinion and relevant examples

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Now it is possible for tourists to travel into any remote locations Identify advantages and disadvantages of this

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