Some people think studying in groups is better, while some think self study is better for school students. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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students learning. While some people are of the opinion that studying in groups gives opportunity to students discuss their different
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a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty
opinions
and learning from it, others believe that
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study
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would be more productive.
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essay will discuss both opinions and I will give my
opnion
a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty
opinion
opinions
. It is certainly true that studying in groups has a positive
affect
a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
effect
on
students
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students'
student
learning. Many subjects that
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have been taught
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have better
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assimilated
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gives
students opportunity to participate in groups of
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. It will promote on these students the necessity of
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discussing
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in addition
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, they will increase their capacity of communication and maximise their knowledge by sharing opinions. When students have some time
deticated
devoted to a cause or ideal or purpose
dedicated
to
studyin
reading carefully with intent to remember
studying
study in
with other classmates, it can
bennefit
financial assistance in time of need
benefit
their
learnig
the cognitive process of acquiring skill or knowledge
learning
.
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, there are other moments where the
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study
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will be more effective and efficient. When students dedicate time for their own
study
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, it has less
destractions
mental turmoil
distractions
destructions
destruction
which
potentialy
with a possibility of becoming actual
potentially
would compromise the assimilation of what they are trying to learn.
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, there are some areas of
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such
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as math and
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that are favourable for
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study
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. These areas would not have the same positive result using groups of
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study
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students
. The opportunity of
self
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study
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for
school
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students learning has more effectiveness
for
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in
certain areas of
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. To summarize, the way students learning at
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has
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have
different impact on their capacity of learning.
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essay discussed tat studying in groups, students can learn from other
collegues
the body of faculty and students of a college
colleges
colleagues
college
and better learn how to express
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reflexive form of "them"
themselves
, and how
self
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study
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in some situations is more efficient for
school
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students learning. I believe that the use of
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methods can
help students developing
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help students in developing
their maximum potential and schools have the
responsability
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
of
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to
guarantee that students can have both of them.

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