In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them.

Nowadays, In Many
coutries
a politically organized body of people under a single government
countries
the people
is gaining
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are gaining
weight and they are not focusing on their health and fitness. In my opinion, human eatable options have changed and it led to the
continious
continuing in time or space without interruption
continuous
container's
weight gaining, because of junk and fast
food
. There are advantages and disadvantages on the both sides. We will discuss in the following arguments.
To begin
with, several people were adopted stuffed
food
habits,
this
attitude result that generates unnecessary fat in their body. Many
food
items have delivered packed and delivered to consumers.
For instance
, chips made of
tomotto
mildly acid red or yellow pulpy fruit eaten as a vegetable
tomato
tomatoes
,
pottato
an edible tuber native to South America
potato
potatoes
and
then
perservatives
tending or having the power to preserve
preservative
has been added to be
long lasting product
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a long lasting product
.
This
packed item has been delivered to the customers. The main benefits
to
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of
the process is inhabitants are not having different taste or it does not available in the particular segment. So they should enjoy with that
receipe
directions for making something
recipe
and
tatste
the sensation that results when taste buds in the tongue and throat convey information about the chemical composition of a soluble stimulus
taste
. On the other side, These
ever lasting
continuing forever or indefinitely
everlasting
consumables
are produces
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produce
are produced
are producing
have produced
the side effect to the society.
For example
, eating excessive lays leading various
illness
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illnesses
like stomach
achce
feel physical pain
aches
ache
, increasing weight, lack of
homoglobin
a hemoprotein composed of globin and heme that gives red blood cells their characteristic color; function primarily to transport oxygen from the lungs to the body tissues
haemoglobin
,
anemia
a deficiency of red blood cells
anaemia
. In order to
aviod
stay clear from; keep away from; keep out of the way of someone or something
avoid
these situation organizations should create
a
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an
awareness in the
community
Accept comma addition
community, such
such
a way that publishing
advertisments
a public promotion of some product or service
advertisements
in different mediums like
Televeision
broadcasting visual images of stationary or moving objects
television
, radio
,
Accept space
,
magazines and conducting wake up
programes
a series of steps to be carried out or goals to be accomplished
programs
programmes
programme
in schools, colleges and public
gathring
a group of persons together in one place
gathering
places
such
as temple, malls. In conclusion, it is very hard to say that change someone routine habits and it leads to the issues, but creating more about
benefits
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the benefits
and drawbacks about fast
food
and junk
food
will gives
Suggestion
will give
a good progress on their diet plan, which inclined with regular life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sedentary
  • obesity
  • overweight
  • physical activity
  • sedentary lifestyle
  • exercise
  • unhealthy diet
  • fast food
  • urbanization
  • modernization
  • stress
  • awareness
  • education
  • government intervention
  • policies
  • promotion
  • sports
  • fitness programs
  • health education
  • taxation
  • public transportation
  • infrastructure
  • parks
  • recreational spaces
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