Inventors are not as important to society as doctors. To what extent do you agree with this statement.

Inventors are creative people who develop new ideas and products, whereas doctors are specialists who make us feel better when we are ill. I believe that both types of people are important to society, but in different ways.
First
of all, we give thanks to the inventors who had discovered the illness and medicine in the past time. They had researched the benefit and disadvantages of them. We can see the example which was vitamin A discovered by Mc.
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in 1980s.
Last
time, most of
societies
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society
did not understand what the meaning of Mc.
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is saying
. They
told
being the one previously mentioned or spoken of
said
that it was strange.
However
, in
20th centuries
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the 20th centuries
, his invention has become the helpful thing in making the medicine. We have known that vitamin A is very important for our body especially the eyes. We can look at
this
vitamin which can be obtained by carrot, chicken egg and green vegetables.
Furthermore
, smart phones are
also
one of the most important inventions for peoples. People found it
most convenient
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more convenient
for them in carrying as well as lots of applications are available due to which they can contact with their family, relatives and friends.
Moreover
, there are lots of things that are invented by inventors that had made
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his
work
also
easy
for example
, home appliances, washing machines, refrigerators etc. In conclusion, both have
different role
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different roles
a different role
and values in our lives, without
doctors human
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doctors, human
beings cannot survive healthy or we can say that no
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can be there to protect from illnesses.
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Obviously, without
inventors new
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inventors, new
inventions cannot take place and there would be no new unique discovery people would be able to see.

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