Nowadays, the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationship people make. Has this become a positive or negative development?

The advancements in
technology
has increasingly changed
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have increasingly changed
have increased changed
the ways people interact with each other. Different types of relationships are affected in different ways due to the technological interferences. Though there
are
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is
considerable amount
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a considerable amount
of positive facts to support
this
, I highly believe that the negative factors outweigh the positive developments of using
technology
as a mean of interacting with each other. People tend
use
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to use
technical devices to contact their friends, family members, relations and many more others who are located around the
world
. For
this
to
happen it
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happen, it
will not take more than a minute, as you just have to press a button on your phone. But the negative side of
this
is, most of the teenagers and
also
adults are addicted to these devices. What most of them do during their leisure time is, taking out their mobile phone, laptop, tab, or any other device to communicate with each other. Nowadays, there is a high trend of introducing smart apps, which have enabled people to cooperate with each other so fast.
This
can be seen as a good trend from one side, where you can increase the
number
of contacts you have all over the
world
, which will lead to gain more knowledge easily. But
on the other hand
, when people are more used to the
technology
, they neglect the real value of relationships and bonds. Back in the days when the society
doesn't had
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doesn't have
these technological instruments, children used to spend their free time by playing different types of sports or by involving in and working for many clubs and societies. These have now
chanaged
made or become different in nature or form
changed
due to these technologies. There are a
number
of positive impacts involved with these technological developments.
For example
, If you need any help or any advice to be taken from your family or friends, you only have to use your mobile phone which and it will not take more than one minute to contact them. Apart from that, decades back people had
forein
of concern to or concerning the affairs of other nations (other than your own)
foreign
friends called 'pen pals'. Back
then
, the only
communicational
the activity of communicating; the activity of conveying information
communication
method was letters. Once a letter is sent, have to wait till weeks or sometimes months to get a reply back from the relevant party. But now the system has changed, and can have a
lots
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lot
of friends around the
world
, and no need to wait for replies for weeks or months. Even
thouh
(postpositive) however
though
thou
so
, there are
number
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a number
of advantages of
this
, disadvantages overweight these advantages. As a
results
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result
of
this
technology
, there is an increase in the
number
of patients who suffer from non-communicable diseases. In
this
new generation, since childhood to the adult age,
its
it is
it's
hard to see people who are engaged in sports over technological
devises
an inclination or desire; used in the plural in the phrase 'left to your own devices'
devices
.
This
has led to so many problems in the society as a whole. In conclusion, by the use of different means of communication the
world
is impacted positively as well as negatively. But in my perspective, I see that the negative developments are far more than the positive impacts as a whole.

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