You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes. Write a letter to the community college. In your letter: say which advertisement you are answering describe which course(s) you want to teach, and what it/they would be about explain why you would be a suitable teacher

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Dear Sir, I am Surya, I am a teacher with

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Master's

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Computer

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Science and Engineering. I have recently noticed an advertisement for the requirement of a teacher at the community college. The college is located on

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Elcamino road 10 meters from the bus stop. I looked into college

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and came up with courses that

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me to teach. I am willing to take up courses in the field of

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science. The course offered will be on Artificial Intelligence because of its popularity among current trends, apart from that I like to teach the basics of

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science and Operating

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. The AI is mostly about the

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artifically

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artificially

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learning to search/identify objects based on the models we train. I strongly believe

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I am the best fit for

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position because of the qualification and the work experience in

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field.

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, I have a Master's in Artificial Intelligence which makes me stand apart from the rest of the applicants. Yours Faithfully, Surya

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