Some people think that modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Technology

has made rapid progress in the past decade. It has changed the way people communicate with each other. It has made lives easier yet taken out the aspect of physical presence which was essential to communicate with another person in the past.

Technology

has opened up new avenues in the way we communicate with another person situated anywhere on the globe. It has enabled us to connect and share information with people irrespective of their location.

This

advancement in

technology

makes it easier for us to find and befriend like-minded people. Each new method

that is

developed

also

gives us the option to choose the level of intimacy and frequency of our communication with another person. In my opinion,

this

growth can make people feel socially active and more willing to engage in conversation with new people.

On the other hand

,

technology

takes away the physical aspect of communication.

This

limitation can make people feel an absence of the human touch and can take away from the clarity of a message. Communicating through messaging or phone can only go as far as getting the words across. We human beings are social animals and need to connect with other beings in their physical form in order to feel a deep connection. One always has the option to ignore social interactions online, but

its

it is

it's

harder to do that in real life. I feel that

technology

doesn’t allow for

deep

Suggestion

deeper

connections to be built because of the above limitations. To summarize,

technology

can be used to build

newer

Suggestion

new

connections at one’s own comfort and

pace but

Accept comma addition

pace, but

its limitations don’t allow for deep lifelong relationships to blossom.