News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported? Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

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Although

such

topics, in all likelihood never will yield, a consensual agreement, a constructive dialogue on the causative factors influencing the news can lead to thought-provoking discussions. My view is that irrespective of the numerous arguments that exist, I believe that these days unpleasant news is more often reported. Through the course of

this

argument, I will put forth my points and calculations considering both sides of the argument. There are a number of reasons in

favor

promote over another

favour

of my viewpoint. One of them is that, contemporary news highly depends on

contents

Suggestion

the contents

that attract

plethora

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a plethora

of viewers

thus

uplifting high revenues for their business.

For instance

, news about the divorce of the superstar Hrithik Roshan was not important for the masses

however

it was featured highly.

Furthermore

, it is

also

seen that a host of the news broadcast is either adverse or unpleasant.

This

type of news captivates the attention of folks as they stimulate suspicion in their mind,

also

becoming addicted to them.

For example

, an article on the loss of life due to heavy rain is the top most priority during rainy season in India contrast to the precautionary measures advocated by the weather research department. There are a few aspects of positive news that

needs

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need

special mentioning. They have the power to instill more affection towards the country and unite everyone. Like the good performance of the sports team, excellence in the field of technology, space or research,

such

news rejuvenate us, but their priority is lesser compared to the former as their followers are rare.

For example

, the ratio of people watching sports news is very less in India because of lower interests

from

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women and children. I see that there is equal potential evidence to support my arguments I have provided and

hence

, my opinion is that my opinion is that

unfavorable

not encouraging or approving or pleasing

unfavourable

news are highly advocated over those that are imperative. I am inclined to believe that news editors have lost all their liberty to create the best piece of articles that will encourage us to believe in good and these will continue until the occurrence of a revolutionary change.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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10Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

354 words

5.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.5

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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