In the past decade, we have developed new advances in medical services and it is believed by some that in another decade or so computers might take over a vast majority of the traditional medical doctor’s work. Discuss the pros and cons of this advancement and give your opinion about it.

In previous times, medical care has witnessed significant progress in terms of technological involvement in medicine. It
is
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has however been said
is however being said
however
been said by some people that most of the routine medical
practitioner’s
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practitioner
job
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jobs
may be overtaken by these machines in
the nearest
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the near
future.
This
essay will discuss how
technology
in the delivery of medical services has been a blessing by prolonging lives and how it may not have helped by
impersonalizing
doctor-patient relationship. Diverse advantages have been seen since the advent of
technology
in healthcare, most notable of which is the prolongation of human lives. Before the invention of some medical devices, it was noticed that patients who come down with some kinds of
diseases especially
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diseases, especially
heart conditions usually had little time to live from
time
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the time
of diagnosis. To illustrate, the
cardiothoracic
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Cardiothoracic
surgery unit of OAUTHC recently collaborated with some Israeli surgeons in replacing defective heart valves of some children using synthetic devices. The survival rate following
this
surgery was found to have increased to five years as compared to the previous two years without the
use
of
manmade
not of natural origin; prepared or made artificially
man-made
heart valves.
Hence
, it is clear that
technology
use
in
healthcare
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health care
may be indispensable in achieving longevity.
In contrast
, the
use
of modern devices in medicine may have a deleterious effect on
patient-doctor relationship
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the patient - doctor relationship
by making it somewhat impersonal.
This
is because sometimes part of the healing process of a patient starts when they have contact with their doctor.
For instance
, the
use
of some health apps by some diabetics to monitor control of their blood glucose may reduce their clinic visits and
thus
reduce the frequency of contact with their physician. It is
thus
clear that the resultant reduced contact with the doctor may cause a strain on their relationship. To conclude,
technology
in delivering healthcare services has indeed done more harm than good. It is felt that though
technology
may be seen to take over some doctor’s work in
the nearest
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the near
future, some of these jobs requiring physical touch may not be completely taken over.
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