Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

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It has been argued that
choice
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the choice
of an individual depicts
one
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's social
background
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and personality.
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, I completely disagree with
this
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notion as numerous facts are out there where an individual appear to be different whereas their interest in dresses are different.
Firstly
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,
this
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essay will discuss that how matured people select their cloths and appear different from their original personality.
Secondly
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,
this
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essay will shadow light on how surrounding and social relation alter their interest. To commence, It has been noticed in among of
young generation
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a younger generation
younger generation
the younger generation
that they begin to quick guess about an individual
background
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and their
character
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by just looking their dressing sense, whereas they entirely put aside the
matureness
the quality of being natural or based on natural principles
naturalness
fact. People who
has achieved
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have achieved
the older age keep
vast experience
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the vast experience
a vast experience
of life along with nature to adopt
new culture
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a new culture
the new culture
.
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,
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,
with the time they learn the advantages of simplicity.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
it becomes beyond bounds of possibility to guess their social
background
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and
character
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.
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, there was in
event
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the event
took place with the great scientist of India Dr. APJ Kalam, in a market he was appeared to be an old man shopping some gift for kids until his identity was not
reveled
make visible
revealed
by
one
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of fan of him.
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,
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,
Impact of
one
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's
surrounding
the environmental condition
surroundings
and social relation modify the interest of people, in spite of where to belong to. India is a country with
diversed
many and different
diverse
religions and,
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, it is secular
also
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. People from
one
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region move to
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
part of country for their bread and butter. They acquire and get accustomed to
new life
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a new life
the new life
.
For example
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,
one
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is shifted to Canada from India and adopted the condition there. To face the weather there he need to obtain
new dressing sense
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a new dressing sense
which nowhere reveals their culture and
character
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. Considering all facts discussed above, I am in
better state
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a better state
to say that dressing sense does not
depicts
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depict
the individual
background
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and
character
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.
Choices
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The choices
are tend change
in contrast
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of geography, knowledge, trending fashion
,
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,
atmosphere and other significant factors.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • attire
  • fashion trends
  • individuality
  • first impressions
  • designer labels
  • social status
  • cultural appropriation
  • dress codes
  • traditional garments
  • sartorial choices
  • symbolism in clothing
  • cultural identity
  • expression of self
  • global fashion industry
  • cultural integration
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