You have an extended family and every year you all get together to go on a family trip for a week. Your uncle is in charge of the plans this year and you would like to suggest a place you have visited lately. Write a letter to your uncle. In your letter: suggest the place you recommend describe your experience in this place mention what you could do there

Dear Uncle, I hope you are doing good and as always you are in charge of planning the event

this

year. Recently, I have been to a

place

in the California state very near to the Silicon Valley called the Yosemite National Park. I would recommend you to suggest

this

place

because it will satisfy all our family needs and activities. The

place

is covered with

lots

of trees and wildlife. During my visit with

friends

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we had been

into

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hiking with a group of people, filled with

lots

of fun and

exciting

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to see the beauty of

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nature. Apart from that, we

also

had a tour guide who took us to various places where we could photograph endangered animals and different plant species. It has

lots

of fun activities during

summer

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season, but we had

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option of skiing in the snow during our visit. Make sure you visit

this

place

during the summer, as you will have

lots

of other activities available

such

as hiking mountains, water sports, and camping. It will be a great

place

, loaded with

lots

of fun with other family members. Yours Lovingly, Surya