It is common practice for some students to take a gap year between high school and university in order to do charitable work abroad in under developed countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages for young people of doing volunteer work?

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It is hard as a young group to take
such
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a
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an
important
life
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decision after
finished
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finishing
high school. For these
reason
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reasons
, many students do a charitable job in a non or
under developed
relating to societies in which capital needed to industrialize is in short supply
underdeveloped
country. It is a
racional
consistent with or based on or using reason
rational
decision
since
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for
the university can be challenging and demand a lot. As everything in
life
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, there are some advantages and disadvantages doing a volunteer work in another place with a different culture and language.
First
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,
the the
definite article
the
good reason to live
abroad especially
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abroad, especially
in a country in need, its the possibility to help others with a low level of education and salary. Depending on the job placement, it is possible to help them to improve a
second
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language, be useful with the daily activities, showing them a new point of view and teaching them new ways to work and gain money.
Also
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, is a good way to learn a lot. These students can learn new abilities and improve others, can discover a new passion, and maybe find what they want to do for the rest of their
lifes
a characteristic state or mode of living
lives
life
. In the end, they
wil
the capability of conscious choice and decision and intention
will
return with a baggage of
knwologde
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,
matureness
the quality of being natural or based on natural principles
naturalness
, and the trip will help them with their
life
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choiches
the person or thing chosen or selected
choices
. The disadvantages are the fact that they
can not
can not
cannot
get used
with
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to
a new culture, and the fact of
been
the state or fact of existing
being
so young can make them fell
imature
characteristic of maturity
mature
immature
or unprepared for the news activities. Learn to live with others students can be hard and prejudice the
convinience
the state of being suitable or opportune
convenience
between them. Be away from the parents and family sometimes create a level of sadness and can
estimulate
act as a stimulant
stimulate
the early return. A volunteer job
envolves
connect closely and often incriminatingly
involves
a lot of
responsability
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
, and if the young student
are not prepared
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is not prepared
, it can
contribuate
bestow a quality on
contribute
to a bad
expirience
the accumulation of knowledge or skill that results from direct participation in events or activities
experience
for the native people or the host
familys
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family's
families
family
(if these are the case). In conclusion, the students
needs
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need
to put in a balance the benefits or not to work abroad, because it is fundamental for their future
life
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as
universities
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university
students. Every
expirience
the accumulation of knowledge or skill that results from direct participation in events or activities
experience
experiences
can bring bad and good consequences. That's why the parents
needs
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need
to provide them security, finding a
responsable
worthy of or requiring responsibility or trust; or held accountable
responsible
place where they can
grown
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grow
up as human
beens
any of various edible seeds of plants of the family Leguminosae used for food
beans
veins
been
.
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