In some countries children have very strict rules of behavior, in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they like. To what extent should children have to follow rules?

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The extent to which youth
follow
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follows
the rules, in itself, it is
very complex issue
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a very complex issue
, since children across the world grow up in very different cultures. In India,
youngster
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the youngster
are expected
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is expected
to be very submissive to their parents and other adults around them.
However
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, it is not the case with the Western countries
of
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on
the planet where children follow the motto ‘Thou
shalt
expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something
should
do what thou wilt’ promoted by the celebrities and rock stars of
region
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the region
. I believe, following strict rules has both, the advantages as well as serious drawbacks as discussed below.
Firstly
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, the strict rules of behaviour creates responsible and respectful attitude to the teenagers, they will become mature and respectful adult.
This
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forms a stable society which is virtually free from negative trends,
such
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as prostitution and drug abuse.
Secondly
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, if children do not obey
straight forward
free from ambiguity
straightforward
concept of
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
, they may
took
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take
wrong path
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the wrong path
a wrong path
and become indolent. It creates a burden on the society, since the government has to find a better way to cater for these social ills. In
addtion
a component that is added to something to improve it
addition
, forcing on the
adolecences
a juvenile between the onset of puberty and maturity
adolescents
to follow strict rules of
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
does not always yield positive results as discussed above, most of the time it backfires and works against society.
For example
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, teenagers are more likely to do the opposite work, which they are instructed, because they
wants
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want
to be an independent person. The scholars should have rights to exercise their free will and develop their own pattern of personality. Imposing strict rules, may simply destroy the individuality of children. At the end of the day, it is clear that children should be guided by rules, but these rules should not be imposed on them because as human beings, they need to have room to develop their own traits of character and adopt a
behavioral
of or relating to behavior
behavioural
pattern of their own.

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