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Many doctors say that people in today’s world do not do enough physical exercise. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions are there to this problem?

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The diagrams illustrate some changes to an area of City Hospital over a period of 3 years. Overall, it can be clearly seen that the road system used to approach the city hospital had some significant transformation. Meanwhile, there were several substitutions of the area around the hospital. In 2007, the city hospital can be accessed through Hospital Road, which had a junction with City Road. After 3 years, the crossroad was replaced by a roundabout, and a junction of Hospital Road and Ring Road
also
 experienced the same replacement over the period shown.
In addition
, a car park for staff and public located east of Hospital Road in 2007 was superseded by a car park for staff only in 2010, and the public car park was moved to a larger space positioned east of the Ring Road.
Moreover
, bus stops on two sides of Hospital Road were eliminated in 2010, and a bus station had been built near Hospital Road having connections with the two mentioned roundabouts.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sedentary lifestyles
  • digital entertainment
  • urbanization
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian areas
  • time constraints
  • lack of awareness
  • active transportation
  • infrastructure
  • workplace wellness programs
  • public awareness campaigns
  • incentivizing
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