children's education is expensive. In some countries, the government pays some or all the costs. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

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Education
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plays a significant role in any countries
improvementioned
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and it is
important aspect
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an important aspect
of
individuals life
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an individual's life
individual's life
the individual's life
individual life
individuals' life
.In some
nations the
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nations, the government
government
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itself pays for studies for the students because
education
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is expensive over there.In the present essay I would suggest some of
positives
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the positives
and negatives of
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condition. In my opinion advantages are more than disadvantages. To start with
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I would like to
tell
express in words
say
that It is
responsibility
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the responsibility
a responsibility
of
government
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to pay for
education
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as people are paying taxes and avenues so it is
duty
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the duty
a duty
of the country to provide free
education
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to the students.We cannot
denie
declare untrue; contradict
deny
the fact
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development of people is the development of the nation.
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so many folks are not able to send their children to school because of
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the poor financial status
of the family.So many
youngers
used of the younger of two persons of the same name especially used to distinguish a son from his father
younger
could not able to do
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studies.
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brings not only literacy Rate to increase the countries economic rate
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gets affected.So
government
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should give free
education
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to all. But it is two sides
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of
to
everything. If nation give free
education
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to all it may a burden to the
government
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of the country As giving free
studis
the territory occupied by one of the constituent administrative districts of a nation
states
to everyone is a big aspect.Here the
education
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authorities can take measures to give option for whose who can pay should pay the fees. To conclude
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I would like to say there is always more advantages than disadvantages.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • socio-economic disparities
  • government funding
  • educational institutions
  • enhanced quality of education
  • educated workforce
  • boosting the economy
  • dependency
  • bureaucracy
  • innovation
  • flexibility
  • parental involvement
  • financially responsible
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