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letter to manager for attending a training program

#manager #program
I am writing with regards to attending a training course in New York for the betterment of my profile. An advertisement was published in The New York Times newspaper on 26th July for the training of human resource professionals. It is a well-conceived plan as it has invited revered personalities in the field of psychology to shed light on multifaceted problems being faced
at
Suggestion
in
 the workplace and would guide on tackling those issues meticulously. I would request you to permit me two hours for the two-day’s session. The scheduled times is 11.00 am to 1.00 pm. I am aware that there is a plethora of pending
work
;
however
, I have already had a word with my assistant, and he would look after the
work
 in my absence. I believe that
this
 program would be highly beneficial for my
work
 as employees discuss concerns at
work
, but sometimes solutions are not readily available.
Nonetheless
, with the guidance of experts, I am confident I will produce reliable answers to the issues faced by the staff, and there would be a high-employee retention ratio. Thank you for your consideration in advance, and I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, John Travis

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