You have just heard some good news about your friend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say how you heard the news • arrange a time to visit your friend at his/her house • explain what you will bring with you

Dear Ashraf, How are you? At
first
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I want to express my happiness
for
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the good news I had heard about you, and let me congratulate you
for
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on
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the new
baby
. I was known that you have got a new
baby
when our common friend Ibrahim met me in the morning
in
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the bus station and I asked him about you, he was very
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glad
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glade
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glad
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to tell me that good news. I ask you to permit me
visiting
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to visit
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you at your home. I am very interesting to take a glance
on
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the new
baby
and your wife, I will visit you
next
Friday at 8pm if
this
time is not suitable for you please inform me when I can visit you. I would be proud to bring a gift for the
baby
. it will be the
first
gift u being for him, it
contain
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a new shirt, cap and pair of socks.
In addition
the
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baby
`s gift I will bring
pocket
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of flowers for your wife. I look forward to
see
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you soon.
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Your
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sincerely Ahmed
shawky
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shaky
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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