You have just heard some good news about your friend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say how you heard the news • arrange a time to visit your friend at his/her house • explain what you will bring with you
Dear Ashraf,
How are you? At
first
I want to express my happiness Add a comma
,first
for
the good news I had heard about you, and let me congratulate you Change preposition
with
for
the new Change preposition
on
baby
.
I was known that you have got a new baby
when our common friend Ibrahim met me in the morning in
the bus station and I asked him about you, he was very Change preposition
at
Correct your spelling
glad
glade
to tell me that good news.
I ask you to permit me Correct your spelling
glad
visiting
you at your home. I am very interesting to take a glance Change the verb form
to visit
on
the new Change preposition
at
baby
and your wife, I will visit you next
Friday at 8pm if this
time is not suitable for you please inform me when I can visit you.
I would be proud to bring a gift for the baby
. it will be the first
gift u being for him, it contain
a new shirt, cap and pair of socks. Change the verb form
contains
In addition
the
Change preposition
to the
baby
`s gift I will bring pocket
of flowers for your wife.
I look forward to Add an article
a pocket
see
you soon.
Change the verb form
seeing
Correct the word
Yours
Your
sincerely
Ahmed Correct your spelling
Yours
shawky
Correct your spelling
shaky
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- secondly
- thirdly
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- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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