in many countries people are concerned about the number of children who are overweight. what do you think are the causes of this?what solutions can you suggest?

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countries of parents are worrying about their children's overweight.The problem for the overweight is

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junkfood

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junk food

and the possible solution is to restrict the

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. The main problem of teenagers overweight is the

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there are unnecessary fats and over calories are there and there are less occur of proteins and nutrients

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these foods.

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many

teen agers

a juvenile between the onset of puberty and maturity

teenagers

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are addicted

to the

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because of its taste and these leads to increase in fats.

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these foods, there

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there will be an

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of obesity and health problems.

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in 2017 there are 70 percent of people having obesity due to these

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foods

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restricts

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and eat the

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by eating

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there will be

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vitamin

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proteins and many more and we can avoid the unnecessary of fats containing

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will give much healthier

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instance, in my school days

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used to eat

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everyday and after some day there are some health issues are

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and the doctor said avoid the

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junk food

and eat the

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made

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conclusion, eating

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junk food

leads to obesity and avoiding

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junk food

and eating

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leads to much healthier and in my recommendation is to eat

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nowadays

70 percent people eating

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rather than fast

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