Some parents believe that a child should not waste time by reading entertainment books, instead they should spend time to read educational books only. What is your opinion about this.

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childrens
a young person of either sex
children
that they
sould
expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something
should
would
not waste
theit
of them or themselves
their
that
time on reading
fun book
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a fun book
fun books
,
inspite
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in spite
of that
tehy
people in general
they
should read
informative book
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an informative book
informative books
to gain more
khowledge
the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning
knowledge
. I completely agree with the above
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a message that is stated or declared; a communication (oral or written) setting forth particulars or facts etc
statement
statements
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in
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at
bottom
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the bottom
. 1stly the entertainment books are full

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