Some people are fond of buying new gadgets, phones or laptops. Is this a good or bad things. Discuss your opinion.

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It is generally asserted that a few people addicted of purchasing modern appliance, mobiles and laptops. In my opinion,

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as people's can be updated within today's world. There are some reasons why

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about people buying new gadgets, mobiles and laptops. One of

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is that; it helps to save money

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, nowadays many companies are launching electricity gadgets on low price so they can it with

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new technology

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more easy and understandable

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a short period

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helps to maintain their standard lifestyle.

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However nobody's

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can say bad things about their living style and

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about them.

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contrary some

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peoples have negative ideas on buying new gadget

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mobiles and laptops. Primarily, it's lost of money.

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as people buy things like

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game one he

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play, then

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he never play it again so it is totally lost of money.

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, it may be unsafe.

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, there most common crime is robbing if we are carrying a new phone

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may be

robbed.

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discrimination between riches and poor people because new gadgets are more expensive so it can buy by only

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people not by poor people so they involve in bad activities. In conclusion, people are found

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buying current mobiles, laptops and appliances.

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, it helps to provide more security and facilities to save time in

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the modern world

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Sat Aug 10 2019

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

technology advancements
convenience
efficiency
productivity
status symbol
financial burden
obsession
impulsive
consumerism
sustainability
e-waste
environmentally friendly
second-hand market
repairability
upgradability

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