You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: say why he/she would not enjoy going to college explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her
Dear James,
Hope you are doing great and thank you for writing to me. You have asked for my advice regarding the
next
step in
you should take - either to join a college or alternatively get a Change preposition
apply
job
. I would suggest that you should gain some work
experience before pursuing higher education.
As I personally know you, you would not enjoy going to college right now because you have always wanted to work
and what better time can it be to work
than now? I personally feel getting a job
is a better idea for you as it would expose you to the real business world which you can capitalise in your education since you are interested in studying in business administration.
I have started my University just after finishing high school and consequently
, I couldn’t get any job
experience in my field which I often regret. I believe you should not make the same mistake and instead
take the opportunity to gain some valuable skills such
as delegating tasks, managing time, meeting deadlines and working in a team. The job
experience will enhance your decision-making and presentation skills. Moreover
, it will open doors for better job
opportunities in the future.
I feel you should work
in a large retail shop as a salesperson or perhaps join a small company that serves customers directly. It makes sense as it would be easier for you to find such
a job
in your city and it would let you understand the business frame closely.
I hope my suggestion would help you decide what is best for you.
Warm regards,
JeffreySubmitted by With the recent improvements to internet on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite