2. You have moved to a new place. Write a letter to a friend giving reason why you moved to that place. Describe that place. Invite your friend to visit you.

#place #friend #reason #visit

Dear Hanna, Hope

this

letter finds you in good health and the best of spirits. I am writing

this

letter to let you know about my new residence and to invite you over to here. As you may be aware

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, Kerala is suffering from frequent floods during

rainy

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season. My old residence has been frequently prone to

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natural calamity as it was situated in a lower area. I thought to shift to Kakkanad to protect myself and my family from

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fatal calamity. My new apartment is situated

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just 2 kilometres from Infopark. It is a peaceful place with a lot of trees and plants around. The facilities of a city along with the calmness of a village can be enjoyed at the same time. It

also

has a beautiful park nearby to rejuvenate our minds and it fills us with positive vibes. I wholeheartedly invite you to stay at my home for a few weeks.

This

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a beautiful place that you would enjoy your pending time over here. Looking forward to

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you soon! Yours Lovingly,

Merrybel

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Merryl

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

183 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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