Universities should accept equal numbers of men and women in every subject. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Number
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The number
of
woman
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women
applicants
has increased
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have increased
in recent years. Universities
accepts
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accept
applicants based on
merit
and not by
gender
.
Hence in
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Hence, in
some courses there are more men than women and vice-versa. Many people have
opinion
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the opinion
an opinion
that there should be equal number of men and women in any subject in universities. In my opinion,
addimissions
the act of admitting someone to enter
admissions
admission
to universities should not be dependent
of
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on
gender
and it should be based on performance of applicants.
This
essay discusses both the sides of
arguments
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the arguments
and highlights reasons for not agreeing to
this
statement.
Certain group
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A certain group
Certain groups
of people
believe
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believes
there should be equal numbers of men and women in every subject in universities. They believe there should be equality among all genders in society and women should be given equal chance for
universities
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university
university's
admission.
Such
practice can
increases
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increase
chances of women to enter male dominant industries like engineering and some public services like transportation. Women are considered to be
good administrator
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a good administrator
good administrators
and
thier
of them or themselves
their
there
presence in engineering sector can help getting
different perspective
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a different perspective
of operations and thought process than conventional. While some people believe in getting equal opportunities for women, it is not always possible to get
same amount
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the same amount
of interest
by
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from
women in all courses.
This
is true for courses that has historical dominance by
woman
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a woman
the woman
like nursing and hospitality. Universities have to focus on making
thier
of them or themselves
their
fellow graduates competent
also
. It is not easy to be competent if one does not have
interest
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an interest
and
merit
standards to
aquire
come into the possession of something concrete or abstract
acquire
skill
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the skill
skills
and knowledge of that subject.
Hence
,
universities
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university's
selection should be based on performance
merit
and not based on
gender
.
This
essay discussed both the sides of
arguments
Suggestion
the arguments
and it explains why it is important to give admission based on
merit
. In my opinion, I strongly believe that performance
merit
should be given more weightage than
gender
for granting
universities
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university
university's
admissions.

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