Universities should accept equal numbers of men and women in every subject. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Number

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The number

of

woman

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women

applicants

has increased

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have increased

in recent years. Universities

accepts

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accept

applicants based on

merit

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and not by

gender

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.

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Hence in

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some courses there are more men than women and vice-versa. Many people have

opinion

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the opinion

an opinion

that there should be equal number of men and women in any subject in universities. In my opinion,

addimissions

the act of admitting someone to enter

admissions

admission

to universities should not be dependent

of

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on

gender

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and it should be based on performance of applicants.

This

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essay discusses both the sides of

arguments

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the arguments

and highlights reasons for not agreeing to

this

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statement.

Certain group

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A certain group

Certain groups

of people

believe

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believes

there should be equal numbers of men and women in every subject in universities. They believe there should be equality among all genders in society and women should be given equal chance for

universities

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university

university's

admission.

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practice can

increases

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increase

chances of women to enter male dominant industries like engineering and some public services like transportation. Women are considered to be

good administrator

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a good administrator

good administrators

and

thier

of them or themselves

their

there

presence in engineering sector can help getting

different perspective

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a different perspective

of operations and thought process than conventional. While some people believe in getting equal opportunities for women, it is not always possible to get

same amount

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the same amount

of interest

by

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from

women in all courses.

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is true for courses that has historical dominance by

woman

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a woman

the woman

like nursing and hospitality. Universities have to focus on making

thier

of them or themselves

their

fellow graduates competent

also

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. It is not easy to be competent if one does not have

interest

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an interest

and

merit

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standards to

aquire

come into the possession of something concrete or abstract

acquire

skill

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the skill

skills

and knowledge of that subject.

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,

universities

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university's

selection should be based on performance

merit

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and not based on

gender

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.

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essay discussed both the sides of

arguments

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the arguments

and it explains why it is important to give admission based on

merit

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. In my opinion, I strongly believe that performance

merit

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should be given more weightage than

gender

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for granting

universities

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university

university's

admissions.