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With the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good step forward while others do not. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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Reading had been among the most common hobbies of people in the world. Though reading experience had been different in different ages of
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, it has only improved from
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. Before
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the invention
 of
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, people used to write and read on leaves, stones, parchments etc. I believe e-books are the
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 in reading. The one obvious advantage of e-books is that thousands of books can fit in a device the size of an average book, which means its easier to carry around, with minimal to zero
maintanance
activity involved in maintaining something in good working order
maintenance
. Some of the other advantages
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 the customization available on the e-books, more intuitive features like
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videos slides,
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videos, slides,
 built-in dictionary etc. The advantages of
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 books are that, being old-school, there
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 required to get started. It is as simple as buying a book and start reading. According to people who prefer
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 books believe that these advantages
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seem
 more fancy and they do not provide the actual benefit over the
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 book. In fact, in a recent
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survey, it
 was found out that the younger
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 of people
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prefers
 e-books while
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the older generation
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 prefers the
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 books. 75% of the people in the survey below age 40 preferred e-books while 60% of people above ages 50 preferred
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 based books. One can argue that, due to initial
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 to be done in case of e-book readers, older
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 who generally are not so tech-savvy, prefer
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 based books. While
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argues
, one
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 offers much more comfort of carrying thousands of books at once and it
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provides
 numerous options. I believe the advantages of e-books outweigh the
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 based books. e-books are
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the next generation
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 in the evolution of reading and it is here to stay. Even though there are a few
disadvatages
the quality of having an inferior or less favorable position
disadvantages
 like
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 and configuration, modern day readers are smart and require very minimal
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, comes with features like page turn sound
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 to provide the look and feel of
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 books.

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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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