if a product is sold and people but it, then advertising is not necessary and can be considered a kind of entertainment. do you agree or disagree with this

Advertisement is the life wire of modern day business.
Although
, if products and services can be purchased by people
easily
Accept comma addition
easily, then
then
advertising is considered unnecessary. In my opinion,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
completely disagreed with the idea that advertisements are mere entertainment because it
informates
impart knowledge of some fact, state or affairs, or event to
informs
us of new
produced
commodities offered for sale
product
and
also
opportunity
Suggestion
an opportunity
the opportunity
to on the prices.
Although
, marke

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

Read more in the eBook

The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »

* free ebook for Premium users

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

What to do next: