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The internet has made knowledge immediately available to people through computers and smartphones all around the world. Much of this knowledge is also free. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

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Individuals now have instant accessibility to information through the world wide web globally with the use of digital gadgets, a great proportion of
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 insight is at no cost. Quick opportunities to access information and bringing solutions to problems from the knowledge acquired is a merit,
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 exposure of children to information beyond their understanding is a key demerit. A wide range of useful applications and technical advancement are few of the advantages of internet availability. Human beings now pursue some career path whilst training online at no extra cost. 
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, I learned how to tie headgear and make-up on few applications using the world wide web which has in turn fetched me a lot of financial gain. Few people get solutions to problems, networking using Google and others derive satisfaction from games and other useful tools. 
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 few individuals
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 technology as a major career, they derive financial satisfaction and fulfilment in training business personnel how to use
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 advancement to achieve several purposes for a fee.
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, children are predisposed to wrong the detail or in some cases, the pattern
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 beyond their status, examples are pornography, too many games, wrong association and networking. Another problem, is that a lot of fraudulent activities happen on
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 platform due to lack of proper security measure like being coined while purchasing goods and services. Conclusively, the exploration of internet has posed few disadvantages, 
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 the advantages of the world wide web outweighs its disadvantages
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 it's a good development in my opinion.

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