We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
People have different views on whether we should help outside of
Use synonyms
country
or not. While, our Suggestion
the country
country
need development and investment, people should help poor countries citizens.
Use synonyms
However
, there are various Linking Words
reason
why we should contribute to our society Suggestion
reasons
instead
of Linking Words
other
nation. It is any of various alternatives; some other
another
moral duty
of each Suggestion
the moral duty
a moral duty
country
resident to lend help to the poor people residing in the Use synonyms
country
as they might be deprived Use synonyms
from
food, clothes or shelter. Every citizen can contribute to the development of infrastructure, health department, and education through taxes to the government. At the same, there are some Suggestion
of
non profit
organizations not commercially motivated
nonprofit
work
in every Suggestion
working
country
for the welfare of the society and to provide social services to people who are in need of financial help or even moral support. Wealthy people can transfer funds to Use synonyms
non profit organization
in order to make sure they are contributing to the society.
Suggestion
nonprofit organizations
nonprofit organization
a nonprofit organization
On the other hand
, if other nation is in need Linking Words
for
support, we should lend hands to help them. People should provide support to other Suggestion
of
countries
residents Suggestion
country
instead
of only helping their own Linking Words
nation
citizens. To give one example few years ago, Suggestion
nation's
syria
was in poor condition, an Asian republic in the Middle East at the east end of the Mediterranean; site of some of the world's most ancient centers of civilization
Syria
sire
lot
of people including kids were injured and suffering due to deficiency of food and doctors in order to protect them. Any human being, would be felt pity for them and they donated food, clothes, even they sent Suggestion
a lot
lots
first
aid help to Syria. If someone Linking Words
have
all necessities, how they can let Suggestion
has
manking
suffer in pain, when they can lend their hand to recover those poor people from all of the living human inhabitants of the earth
mankind
worse life situation
. Developed countries have enough resources to feed their residents and they could stand in Suggestion
the worse life situation
a worse life situation
favor
of underdeveloped countries which would be destroyed with the reason of natural or unnatural calamities. promote over another
favour
As a result
, as a human being, we should not think about Linking Words
ouselves
as being selfish rather than should take action to stop the destruction and flourish the life.
In conclusion, an individual should give priority to their own reflexive form of "us"
ourselves
yourselves
Use synonyms
country but
they should stand for what is right and in favour of Accept comma addition
country, but
protection
of mankind.Suggestion
the protection
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