Some people feel that paparazzi should not follow celebrities and invade their privacy by taking pictures of them everywhere, while others believe this is just the price of fame. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Many fans believe that, if you are a famous person, all people have the right to follow you.

However

, several followers’ think that celebrities

also

have their own life. I totally agree that we all have to respect the others privacy and do not interrupt them.

This

essay will highlight on the both ways of thinking. At

first

, the well-known people not only are having jobs as any other citizen in the society, but

also

having families and children. Being a fan

Suggestion

this

singer or actor, it does not mean that you have the right to talk or take a photo with him /her. If the celebrities accept all the paparazzi they will not be able to walk any local area.

For example

, an Egyptian actor; Nelly; said in a TV program that she

have

Suggestion

has

to go out wearing

higab

a headscarf worn by Muslim women; conceals the hair and neck and usually has a face veil that covers the face

hijab

to change her appearance to avoid the dealing

this

others.

On the other hand

, sometimes people thought that famous individuals must accept the others’ treatment because these

followers support

Suggestion

followers to support

them. It is better for any famous writer or musician to show his /her interest to the audience

instead

of refusing them.

For instance

, Mahmoud Saad; a well known writer; he made an aggressive reaction to a person who had tried to get his signature in

crowded place

Suggestion

a crowded place

crowded places

; after that Saad apologized in social media to

this

fan. In conclusion; the price of fame may be

costs

Suggestion

costing

a lot and keeping on your own privacy is much harder. The successful celebrity is the one who can make the balance between the audience and his /her peace.

Mon Aug 12 2019

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