Some people feel that paparazzi should not follow celebrities and invade their privacy by taking pictures of them everywhere, while others believe this is just the price of fame. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Introduction

Many fans believe that, if you are a famous person, all people have the right to follow you.

However

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, several followers’ think that celebrities

also

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have their own life. I totally agree that we all have to respect the others privacy and do not interrupt them.

This

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essay will highlight on the both ways of thinking.

Body · 1

first

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, the well-known people not only are having jobs as any other citizen in the society, but

also

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having families and children. Being a fan

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this

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singer or actor, it does not mean that you have the right to talk or take a photo with him /her. If the celebrities accept all the paparazzi they will not be able to walk any local area.

For example

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, an Egyptian actor; Nelly; said in a TV program that she

have

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has

to go out wearing

higab

a headscarf worn by Muslim women; conceals the hair and neck and usually has a face veil that covers the face

hijab

to change her appearance to avoid the dealing

this

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others.

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On the other hand

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, sometimes people thought that famous individuals must accept the others’ treatment because these

followers support

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followers to support

them. It is better for any famous writer or musician to show his /her interest to the audience

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of refusing them.

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, Mahmoud Saad; a well known writer; he made an aggressive reaction to a person who had tried to get his signature in

crowded place

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a crowded place

crowded places

; after that Saad apologized in social media to

this

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fan.

Conclusion

In conclusion; the price of fame may be

costs

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costing

a lot and keeping on your own privacy is much harder. The successful celebrity is the one who can make the balance between the audience and his /her peace.

Aug 12, 2019

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Topic Vocabulary:

invasion of privacy
personal space
media scrutiny
mental health
public figures
relentless pursuit
legal implications
ethical considerations
tabloid journalism
financial gain
public interest

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