An American film actor once said, “Tomorrow is important and precious”. Some people think individuals and society should pay more attention to the future than to the present. Do you agree or disagree?
Many people think that the present should be
got
more attention than the Suggestion
getting
future
. Whereas, others suppose that people should focus on tomorrow rather than the current time. In my opinion, both of them should be get
the same priorities.
On the one hand, the current time is more important because of Suggestion
getting
it’s
direct impacts on the of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
future
. In fact, if the existing issues are not addressed immediately, people can have to face more serious ones in the long term. For example
, a country will be easy to be controlled by its’ enemy, because of internal violence, the increasing number of crimes and poverty condition which are not eliminated directly at the moment. Another reason is that ignoring the present can lead to mental problems. It is obvious that if he do not finish his present works, a staff have
to Suggestion
has
face
the loading of uncompleted tasks constantly. to cause to do through pressure or necessity, by physical, moral or intellectual means
force
As a result
, he would get stressful and metal
diseases.
involving the mind or an intellectual process
mental
On the other hand
, one should keep the future
in mind and not fritter away all things to enjoy the present. It is clear that people need to save a part of resources to prepare and perform plans in the future
. Obviously, the period of earning money is limited, therefore
workers have to put aside enough money that can ensure their later life when they retire. Furthermore
, living forward the future
can help people get away from current depressions. For example
, a person usually with working stress can become more positive if he think
that everything he is doing is to have a more beautiful Suggestion
thinks
future
.
In conclusion, I strongly argue that both the future
and the present all play a vital role in human life. Therefore
, it cannot confirm which is more important, of course, we need to focus on both.Submitted by Thanh
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite