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The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000, there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on the British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. do u agree or not?

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Pollution in any sense is going to ultimately destruct the human race
,
Accept space
,
whether it is air, water or noise. Here, we are talking about air and noise both as
transport
 is the one form creating both. I totally agree with the statement that rules and regulations should be developed so as to control the ownership of
car
Suggestion
the car
a car
 as a form of
transport
. Earning and spending capacity of people nowadays is growing and
therefore
 they majorly spend on upgrading their lifestyles, with each member of
family
Suggestion
the family
a family
 having their own car for convenience. Today, having
car
Suggestion
a car
 is not considered as a luxury and
instead
 a need. To help the general public, public
transport
 is one
way
 everyone is eased to use and is the most budget and maintenance free
way
 of
transport
.
government
Suggestion
Government
 and
enviornment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
 agencies should encourage general public
to support
Suggestion
support
 environmental friendly ways of
transport
 so as to control the two forms of
transport
.
Moreover
,
this
way
 the traffic will be controlled. Alternative ways of
transport
 can be public
transport
Suggestion
transported
transporting
, bicycles or pooling or sharing own vehicle
by
Suggestion
with
 people working in
same office
Suggestion
the same office
, can be a great
way
 to solve
this
 problem at
glance
Suggestion
a glance
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • reliance on
  • regulate
  • traffic congestion
  • pollution
  • public health
  • sustainable development
  • alternative forms of transport
  • car ownership
  • balancing benefits and drawbacks
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