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Early technological developments brought more benefits and changes to people’s life than the recent technological developments. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Technological development has taken a
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
 stage in our lives. Human existence is so dependent on it that one cannot
fanthom
come to understand
fathom
 life without it. It is my opinion that recent
technogical
based in scientific and industrial progress
technological
 developments have been more beneficial than earlier ones. Recent innovations have totally changed the way we transact business and even how nations war with each other. Admittedly, past innovations are the bedrock of recent discoveries, it is pertinent to note that recent ones have been mind blowing.
For instance
, the way we shop has changed drastically
,
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,
you don't need cash to shop any more. A typical example is in Sweden, you only need a chip inserted in your thumb and with these you can shop and carry out your financial
transanctions
a written account of what transpired at a meeting
transactions
transaction
 without handling cash physically
thus
 cutting out time wasted on sourcing for cash.
Secondly
, recent discoveries have changed the rule of warfare so much that countries will only use
this
 as a
last
 resort if all other options have been exhausted. With the advent of drone technology, countries can engage each other without deploying soldiers physically and yet wreak so much havoc on each other. A recent example is where the United States of America deploys the use of drones to hunt and kill
warlord
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a warlord
the warlord
 in Afghanistan without any casualty on their side. In conclusion
,
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,
past discoveries have been
beneficial but
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beneficial, but
 recent innovations have been so mind blowing and one cannot imagine living without them. They have become a
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
 stage
to
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for
in
of
 our lives.
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