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Government should spend money to increase the development of sport and art for school students rather than supporting professional sport and art performances for general public. Do you agree or disagree?

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The arts and
sport
 play an integral role in providing entertainment. There are those who believe that the government must prioritize allocation of finances to motivate the progression of
art
 and
sport
 for school children than extending support for professional
sport
 and
art
 events for enthusiasts.
Although
 helping professional sports and place or musical events have a benefit, I am of opinion that the country's administration should focus more on encouraging the enhancement of
sport
 and
art
 among students because of the reasons explained in the essay. On one hand, focusing more on funding
art
 exhibitions and athletic championships is helpful, because it will keep them alive. Many artists and players are on the blink of discontinuing it, because it is no longer popular among the spectators, and
therefore
, by supporting these dying arts, the government will prevent it from disappearing altogether.
For example
, the traditional Kabadi and seashell
art
 of South India is obsolete, as they did not receive the funds they needed.
Hence
, if the Indians had sponsored these arts and sports, they would have averted situation.
On the other hand
, if monetary support is provided for the improvement of
sport
 and
art
 at school, the popularity in deserves will be attained. With the advent of the Internet and globalization, the local athletics and
art
 performances are becoming less known. So, if the education board introduces it as a compulsory module, it is likely to increase the exposure of it to the young ones and thereby, popularizing it gradually.
For instance
, the Kung Fu in China suffered a lot in the 80s but it regained its position when it was introduced as a course in the school by Jung woo province.
Thus
, in order to create awareness, it is indispensable to adopt the aforementioned step. In conclusion, while sponsoring the drama and sporting championship is fruitful for keeping it in existence, I believe that investing
on
Suggestion
in
 the improvement plan is more viable, because it will pave way for the establishment of the
died
no longer having or seeming to have or expecting to have life
dead
 out
art
 and
sport
.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
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  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
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