Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only Government and large companies can make difference. To what extend do you agree or disagree.

To a large extent
,
Accept space
,
many people think that
environment
can be improved only by
Government
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the Government
and large companies, but the fact is
individuals contribution
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an individual's contribution
individual's contribution
individual contribution
is
also
necessary along with Government and large companies. I completely disagree with the statement that individuals can't do anything to improve the
environament
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
as they will play the major role. Now-a-days many people
are voluntarily involving
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are voluntarily involved
in some of the actions which are very helpful for the clean
environment
which is
happy sign
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a happy sign
. As a responsible citizen in the society who is educated should be able to teach the people who are
illterates
not able to read or write
illiterate
regarding the drawbacks if we don't maintain
then
environment
neat and balanced. Every individual should involve in giving exposure to the
socitey
an extended social group having a distinctive cultural and economic organization
society
on the importance of
environment
and remedies to prevent the damage to the
environment
.If each individual takes
this
responsbility
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
and expose it to the Government and large companies,
then
their work will be much easier in implementing the
preventitive
preventing or contributing to the prevention of disease
preventive
measures as they have a good support from all the
indivuals
a human being
individuals
.
For example
, Our Indian Prime Minister implemented Swatch Bharat to keep the
environment
neat and clean.As a part of Government, he can only implement the policies, it is the individual's
responsibilty
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
to follow that and bring the difference. It is very happy that Swatch Bharat is being implemented successfully in many of the areas
becuase
for the reason that; on account of
because
of the individual support. Large companies will have
guts
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the guts
to introduce the new policies to the improvement of
environment
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the environment
only if there is a tremendous cooperation from the individuals. To conclude, As how individuals play a major role in bringing the
government which
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government, which
they think they can be comforted, In the same way, individuals are the right sources which can make a huge difference in the
environment
improvement.
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