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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Write at least 250 words

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Nowadays, some people argue that
work
 and study at the same
time
 can
result overwhelming
Accept comma addition
result, overwhelming
 for the students, obstructing their
time
 for education. In
this
 essay I will explore some of the problems associated with
this
 and suggest some solutions.
Firstly
, one problem with
this
 issue is that some families don't have the resources necessary to provide help for their children and pay their studies.
As a result
, they're obligated to
work
 an amount of hours to pay their studies. A solution for
that is
 the support from the government.
However
, not always is possible to have
this
 support,
therefore
, the students they are obligated to
work
.
On the other hand
, study and
work
 can be possible if the student knows how to combine these two.
For instance
, if their studies suppose a lot of hours of concentration and dedication, the student can always talk with the school and extend their course.
In other words
, expanding the
time
 of their studies, they can
work
 and do their homework
as a result
 being less stressful for them. To sum up, study and
work
 can be difficult. Despite the problem of the money, if they need help always can have access to possible help thanks to the government or if they can't forward
this
 help always they have the possibility to talk with the school to extend their program of studies and have the possibility to
work
 at the same
time
.
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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