Fashion trends are difficult to follow these days and it’s widely believed that they primarily exist just to sell clothes. Some people believe that we shouldn’t follow them and that we should dress in what we like and feel comfortable in. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Nowadays,
people
believe fashion
trends are marketing tools for companies to sell clothes
, as following fashion
trends is difficult. Members of society
think we should dress in what we feel comfortable with instead
of wearing fancy clothes
. Individuals
should wear textiles that suit their interests, whether or not fashion
tendencies are changing.
On the one hand, individuals
have many benefits from not following fashion
trends and wearing what they want. Firstly
, people
don’t have to spend sums of money on buying new clothes
because individuals
are pleased with their clothes
. Furthermore
, choosing clothes
is no longer a problem because there are a few textiles in people
’s wardrobes. As a result
, individuals
can save a lot of time deciding what they need to wear every morning. For example
, it is convenient for employees of a company to wear jeans and shirts every day while
others choose one of the clothes
that they have. Secondly
, a man not prone to pricey clothes
must have high self-esteem. While
the crowd sticks with stylish hair or expensive clothes
, his style could make a trend that people
have not seen before.
On the other hand
, there are also
many positive points for the environment and society
. There is a fact that a minority of wealthy people
buy extravagant clothes
or stylish shoes and wear them several times to boast that they are rich and throw clothes
away as soon as they are old-fashioned. That is
a huge of human waste that can be eliminated. Therefore
, reducing human waste is a solution to limit damage to our planet, especially since climate change is leading to extreme phenomena, such
as tsunamis and storms. On the social scale, the distance between the poor and the rich will be shorter as individuals
who have wealthy circumstances rarely change their styles. Consequently
, the society
will be affluent because everyone will be treated more fairly.
In conclusion, people
ought to wear clothes
they like because there are many benefits for individuals
, society
and the environment.Submitted by dohuyhoang on
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