It is inevitable that traditional cultures will be lost as technology develops.  Technology and tradition are incompatible. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

It is

belived

accept as true; take to be true

believed

by many groups that as the technology is developing day after day traditional cultures known to mankind for centuries are fading away.

However technology

Accept comma addition

However, technology

has

also

led to increase in the number interest of people in various other traditional

culture

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cultures

, which were not earlier

know

in the historical present; at this point in the narration of a series of past events

now

to

certain goup

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a certain group

certain group

certain groups

of people.

Culture

is something a person inherits from parents or maybe adapted by someone later in life and

this

is where technology plays a key role. Technology

has bring

Suggestion

has brought

the world very

closer

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closely

, there are information and view regarding cultures just a click away

in contrast

to

earlier time

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earlier times

an earlier time

, when people used to travel countries for

same

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the same

which would take years, along with other

chalenges

take exception to

challenges

changes

.

However

, Technology opened gates to

new world

Suggestion

a new world

full of beautiful traditional

culture

, same time people are giving up the ones known to them and

.

Accept space

.

People are more

courious

beyond or deviating from the usual or expected

curious

about new tradition and

culture

which lead to

lossing

fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense

losing

loosing

loosen

there

of them or themselves

their

inheretence

hereditary succession to a title or an office or property

inheritance

and failing to forward generation known

culture

to

thier

of them or themselves

their

children. In

conclusion

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conclusion, although

although

technolgy

the practical application of science to commerce or industry

technology

has introduced many traditional

culture

Suggestion

cultures

, enlightened people about century old cultures that existed on the other side of the world with the reason of its very existence, to every little detail.

Technolgy

the practical application of science to commerce or industry

Technology

the same time families living far from each other are able to connect to embrace their

culture

. But the same

technolgy

the practical application of science to commerce or industry

technology

is the reason which is causing loss of interest in

thier

of them or themselves

their

own

belife

any cognitive content held as true

beliefs

and life long known traditional cultures as it might not be as exciting as others.