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It is inevitable that traditional cultures will be lost as technology develops.  Technology and tradition are incompatible. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

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It is
belived
accept as true; take to be true
believed
 by many groups that as the technology is developing day after day traditional cultures known to mankind for centuries are fading away.
However technology
Accept comma addition
However, technology
 has
also
 led to increase in the number interest of people in various other traditional
culture
Suggestion
cultures
, which were not earlier
know
in the historical present; at this point in the narration of a series of past events
now
 to
certain goup
Suggestion
a certain group
certain group
certain groups
 of people.
Culture
 is something a person inherits from parents or maybe adapted by someone later in life and
this
 is where technology plays a key role. Technology
has bring
Suggestion
has brought
 the world very
closer
Suggestion
closely
, there are information and view regarding cultures just a click away
in contrast
 to
earlier time
Suggestion
earlier times
an earlier time
, when people used to travel countries for
same
Suggestion
the same
 which would take years, along with other
chalenges
take exception to
challenges
changes
.
However
, Technology opened gates to
new world
Suggestion
a new world
 full of beautiful traditional
culture
, same time people are giving up the ones known to them and
.
Accept space
.
 People are more
courious
beyond or deviating from the usual or expected
curious
 about new tradition and
culture
 which lead to
lossing
fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense
losing
loosing
loosen
there
of them or themselves
their
inheretence
hereditary succession to a title or an office or property
inheritance
 and failing to forward generation known
culture
 to
thier
of them or themselves
their
 children. In
conclusion
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conclusion, although
although
technolgy
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technology
 has introduced many traditional
culture
Suggestion
cultures
, enlightened people about century old cultures that existed on the other side of the world with the reason of its very existence, to every little detail.
Technolgy
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
Technology
 the same time families living far from each other are able to connect to embrace their
culture
. But the same
technolgy
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technology
 is the reason which is causing loss of interest in
thier
of them or themselves
their
 own
belife
any cognitive content held as true
beliefs
 and life long known traditional cultures as it might not be as exciting as others.

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