You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter, ⦁describe what you enjoyed about the course ⦁say how much cooking you've done since the course ⦁suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

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Dear Sir or Madam,

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is Isa Azim. I am writing

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letter to share my experiences through attending your cookery course which was offered in your school the

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couple of months. I was informed about

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class from your digital advertisement and enrolled in that course immediately. Our trainer was so friendly and professional in his field. His ability to teach us was awesome.

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, the class duration was acceptable

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, it is suggested to add the time of each course at least one hour. It will be more effective,

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reducing the attendance anxiety if they may not accomplish that day's assignment.

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, I believe the school might be more obsessive in the choice of participants. With more details, I advise you the consider the range of students' ages to have appropriate cooperation with each other and better mutual understanding. Actually, I have cooked so many times since

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and used all I learned from the courses. Honestly, I did not hear anything but compliments through my cooked from all of my family members and friends. Please let me know if your school tends to offer complementary courses

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as fast cooking and teaching traditional or international recipes. I appreciate your attention. My contact number and email address are attached to the letter. Please do not hesitate to contact me at any time. Yours sincerely Isa Azim

eesa.azimWed Dec 20 2023

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coherence cohesion

For logic structure, ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea and that ideas flow clearly from one to the next without extraneous or confusing information.

task achievement

Make sure that you address the three bullet points from the task equally to entirely satisfy the task achievement criterion. Each point should be elaborated sufficiently.

coherence cohesion

Use cohesive devices appropriately to show the relationship between ideas. Avoid under-use or over-use.

task achievement

Maintain a consistently appropriate tone throughout your letter. Avoid informal language in a formal letter.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

230 words

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