You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter, ⦁describe what you enjoyed about the course ⦁say how much cooking you've done since the course ⦁suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer
Dear Sir or Madam,
This
is Isa Azim. I am writing this
letter to share my experiences through attending your cookery course which was offered in your school the last
couple of months.
I was informed about this
class from your digital advertisement and enrolled in that course immediately. Our trainer was so friendly and professional in his field. His ability to teach us was awesome. Moreover
, the class duration was acceptable however
, it is suggested to add the time of each course at least one hour. It will be more effective, besides
reducing the attendance anxiety if they may not accomplish that day's assignment. Furthermore
, I believe the school might be more obsessive in the choice of participants. With more details, I advise you the consider the range of students' ages to have appropriate cooperation with each other and better mutual understanding.
Actually, I have cooked so many times since then
and used all I learned from the courses. Honestly, I did not hear anything but compliments through my cooked from all of my family members and friends.
Please let me know if your school tends to offer complementary courses such
as fast cooking and teaching traditional or international recipes.
I appreciate your attention. My contact number and email address are attached to the letter. Please do not hesitate to contact me at any time.
Yours sincerely
Isa AzimSubmitted by eesa.azim on
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